Toko School is selling amazing free range eggs.The eggs we sell at Toko School are scrumptious and eggcellent. Our free range eggs start at $2.50. If you don’t hurry they will run out.
Hi Charis I really like the way you used the word scrumptious and the capital letters for Toko. I noticed you put the if too close to the full stop, maybe you could fix that up. Where is Toko School and I want to know what the most expensive eggs are?
I really liked how I put in poetic language.I also liked how I put the costs of the eggs so that people can just get them off the stall without having to ask how much they are. I think I can work on telling them where Toko School is.
Hi Charis I really like the way you used the word scrumptious and the capital letters for Toko. I noticed you put the if too close to the full stop, maybe you could fix that up. Where is Toko School and I want to know what the most expensive eggs are?
ReplyDeleteI really liked how I put in poetic language.I also liked how I put the costs of the eggs so that people can just get them off the stall without having to ask how much they are. I think I can work on telling them where Toko School is.
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